It was a usual day. Nothing's out of ordinary.
I was walking through the park, the one i visit every now and then.
I stopped to look at the water, when "BAH!
What? Who is here?"
I look around, but no, i'm alone.
Finally relaxing, i continue down the path.
You know, those weird creatures called humans walk really funny.
How come they never notice... me?
P.s. Good writing is supposed to evoke sensation in the reader -
not the fact that it is raining, but the feeling of being rained upon.
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